A song I've written....

I've recently been writing a Song and thought I should post it somewhere. I guess I'll start here. It still needs a bit of tweaking, but this is what I have so far...


Follow your dreams and you will see,
The world around you is blissfully,
Like a wonderland in the heavens above,
Just believe and trust the ones you love.

We'll find a way,
As long as Im beside you,
If you begin to fall,
I'll be there to catch you.

Trust your instinct,
You'll make it through,
Never guess, Its always true,
If you keep on running,
I'll follow you.

It will be hard,
It will be tough,
But I'm sure we're strong enough.

I'll protect you,
No matter what.
Courage and love is all we've got.
Im sure your spirit will percifear,
Because the future is now clear.

(Instrumental???)

Wow!!!! That's awsome!!! :3

Wow, that's GREAT! Better than anything I've ever read. You should try putting it to music. It'll be awesome.